Hey it’s me bloodpool,Im even better because i killed t-ray and i became mayor of america and so i just ran the world bad guys they were nothing robbing banks ill stop them and put them in justice and im so cool im in my early 20’s im 21 and i got a A star for everything so im super smart.so iv’e got a new friend hes name is t jay amd we go out we race i was in my lambo and he was in a corvet it was kited out .but there already rebelling so one day i was in my bed and then i hear… BANG BANG then by the time i opened my eyes i was in a van and they were poring gasoline on me an boy came to my face and said.”Do you know who i am” and i said no im the boy that doesn’t have a dad and i said whats that got to do with me bruv and he said the you know t-ray and i said yeh i killed him he said thats my
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January 3, 2016 at 10:00 am
A solid effort here Alexis and well done for working on it over the holidays. Here are some areas to improve on to make it even better.
One of the first parts of this badge is creating a world which has sufficient depth, in order to create this you need to write a minimum of 600 words. You need to add some description in order to achieve this. Think of an image in your head and put it into words so I can see it too.
As a starting point make sure that you always use a capital ‘I’ and never the lower case ‘i’ when you are referring to yourself and